My First Drama Project (II)

Okay, post ini adalah lanjutan dari post sebelumnya.

Drama Project – Day 2

Sabtu, 3 Desember 2011

Mungkin kelasku sangat beruntung karena mendapat advisor yang sangat bertanggung jawab. Dia adalah Kak Emil. Dia sendiri beberapa hari sebelumnya masuk ke dalam nominasi ketua English Student Association. Dia sudah membaca drama script-ku. Komentarnya: script kamu bagus dan kreatif. Tapi, aku masih beharap ada dialog yang lebih ekspresif. Kalau dari pandangan sebuah drama, kita yang memberikan imajinasi, bukan membuat penonton berimajinasi. Tapi, memang aku puas sama ide kamu. PR-nya, kembangkan karakternya malam ini.

Yay, ternyata kerja kerasku untuk menuliskan skrip drama lumayan juga ;D Jadi, setelah bekerja semalaman, inilah sepotong scene dari drama script yang kutulis.

Time Machine

Scene               : A train carriage

Characters      : Senja, Gema, A man, A girl

Senja sits in a train carriage. Gema comes and brings a painting. He looks for a seat, but all of the seats are full. Senja is surprise. She does not want to look at him.

Girl                  : Take your bag, Dude. Give the seat to him.

Man                 : That`s his business.

Girl                  : But there`s no another empty seat.

The man takes his bag lazily. Then, Gema takes the seat there, beside the man and Senja

Girl                  : May I take a look to your painting?

Gema gives his painting to the girl.

Girl                  : Wow, what an awesome painting! It`s a wedding party, right? But wait,

there`s just the guesses in this painting. Where are the bride and the

groom?

Gema               : (gives a mysterious smile) The bridge and the groom are here.

Senja                : (murmurs) Why are you coming back? I am sick of this damn thing.

Gema               : Why am I here? You see, I`m just taking the train.

Senja                : No, I mean… don`t you see? I`m tired of this game. I`m tired of your

fucking game.

Gema               : Sshh… the train will pass a tunnel.

Senja                : Will you go and suddenly disappear again?

Gema               : I will, but I won`t go and disappear alone.

The train passes a tunnel. The carriage becomes dark.

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